Only just had time to read this. If it is going to be posted a chapter at a time I will go mad. Comment wise if you're interested; I've not been thrown out of a single sentence - you know when you're reading and something is wrong and it screws up your whole flow? Not once. I approve! It flows very well. In my world that is the difference between enjoying a book and endless frustration.
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Date: 2014-02-23 09:29 am (UTC)